Air Battle

i prefer Tom's Tomcat artwork. That Tomcat piece has definitely better mood and atmosphere not talking about the plane itself. Just the 2 guys are off scale, they are too small... This one is too colorful and crowded with action... less is sometimes more. he perspective doesnt work very well here

not talking about some non logical elements like flames coming out of the tail and not from the engine etc

btw if you are not sure with perspective use a layer with photo or simply 3D model (Google sketchup?).